Matt Bellamy

What about when mods have to edit someone's post, do we have to pay for that?

Great idea to spell home down the side and then backwards-symbolizes the fact that everything is suddenly opposite. The last line of the first stanza didn't see to flow too ...

Ditto everyone else, especially the lacing up thing. Also the line in capitals didn't work for me. You want emphasis, maybe try italics. Or just one word in italics- What ...

Things that worked At you, as in charging As in merging in the margins -I've said that over and over in my head, I love the way it sounds. Similarly, ...

Things that worked I’ve become another cardboard cutout An example to display in an art class (It's good because...well, good imagery I guess, great idea.) While trying to buy us ...

Hows about enabling us to see points in the randomness and lounge forums then, so we can see how many points we have left at a glance? or at least ...

Interesting idea, I like it. However a couple of lines didn't seem to make sense, for the sake of rhyming. And "This is the poem's first line," was actually the ...

You switched between past and present tense-"Then the phone rang, just as I thought of you/I'm told you have died, there was nothing they could do". The rhyming was forced ...

Anyone else noticed how many thirty-six year olds are on this site all of a sudden? Look at the birthdays at the bottom to see what I mean, and this ...

Ditto Snip Snip, although Yoda is truly awesome. It seemed as if you structured lines this way just for the sake of rhyming. The rhyming scheme, is interesting though, it's ...

I'm not usually much of a fan of rhyming poetry but you carried this off really well. I think the rhythm was great, especially in the second stanza. The rhyming ...

Ditto snip snip ;) It took me ages to figure out what the second one meant.

*Chants* Mods, Mods, Mods! Mmkay. Lyric poetry, too. And Brad's usergroup which has a long title I can't remember. Tis good.

You certainly don't have to be good looking to be attractive, I think. In relationships, I don't think it's important how someone looks, so certainly not in any other circumstances. ...

Meep. :o *packs bags and jumps on plane with Emma*